Are schools and teachers responsible for low test scores and bad grades?
Some people consider that tutors want obligation for do good perform in their own subject. so it depends on schools what they has give permission to teachers doing well in their trades.
First of all, there is no doubt that today education play a vital role of life but also third eye of human being lifetime.After that, whatever who would achieve everythings what they needs in their own life . In fact, this is also responsible for parents to guide their kids to face the reality why they might handle this situation their own way.
Nevertheless, nowadays there are plethora primary schools available on anywhere. Principles have very awarness about their staffs. Thus, teachers has extremely giving test for every year to proof her/him self. Moreover, pupils should need to do best in study because only teacher can't do it instead of juvenile could not serious about studies. However, in these teenagers like a coach tomatoes. For instance, they are playing many games for phone as far as they has using pethore applications as whatsapp, Facebook, Instagram, Snapchat and so on. Therefore, they has wasting many time on social sites. Last but not the least, teachers and schools are not responsibility to low grades and poor scores for exams. Then, parents have equal duty to what their childs has doing in their studies and even they need to spend qualities time for their adolescents.
All said and done, I reckon teachers and schools has always giving best options for their students. Thus,kids have need awreness about their study
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, third, thus, well, for instance, i reckon, in fact, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.046692607 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47338151704 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.5254484038 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4666666667 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23644519271 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0887209000157 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134333959874 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135109609619 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832007918938 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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