The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given bar chart illustrates sales estimates for jeans in Turkey for two companies for next year. The pie chart gives information about how much each company will own of the jeans market by the end of the year.
Overall, it is clear that while the Jack&Jones Co company produce more jean than the Mango Co company in most months, the exception is July and August. Meanwhile, others accounted for most of the percentage in the market share projection.
Looking at the bar chart, Jack & Jones jeans clothing sales will be roughly 450 thousand pairs in January, which is almost 3 times more than Mango Co company. This number decreases significantly in June, at about 300 thousand pairs of jeans. In July, Jack & Jones continued stable, in comparison in the Mango Co has increased dramatically and is higher than the Jack & Jones from July to August, at about 400 thousand pair and 500 thousand pair respectively. In September, Jack & Jones has risen sharply and hit 900 thousand pairs. Meanwhile, Mango Co still remains stable from September to November and grows slightly about 600 thousand pairs.
Looking at the pie chart, others accounted for half of the market share while Mango corporation and Jack&Jones Co only have 20% and 30% market share respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 95, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Co) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
...any produce more jean than the Mango Co company in most months, the exception is July a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1053.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96698113208 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60281961045 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537735849057 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0777204597 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.3 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 5.23603664747 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286943814119 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135488475203 0.103423049105 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164287078688 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232812693607 0.15604864568 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198597969669 0.0819641961636 242% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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