The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The given bar chart illustrates sales estimates for jeans in Turkey for two companies for next year. The pie chart gives information about how much each company will own of the jeans market by the end of the year.
Overall, it is clear that while the Jack & Jones Co company produces more jeans than the Mango Co company in most months, the exception is July and August. Meanwhile, others accounted for most of the percentage in the market share projection.
Looking at the bar chart, Jack & Jones jeans clothing sales will be roughly 450 thousand pairs in January, which is almost three times more than Mango Co company. This number decreases significantly in June, at about 300 thousand pairs of jeans. In July, Jack & Jones remained stable, while Mango Co increased dramatically and is now higher than Jack & Jones from July to August, at approximately 400 thousand pairs and 500 thousand pairs, respectively. In September, Jack & Jones rose sharply and hit 900 thousand pairs. Meanwhile, Mango Co still remains stable from September to November and grows slightly about 600 thousand pairs.
Looking at the pie chart, others accounted for half of the market share, while Mango Co and Jack & Jones Co only have 20% and 30% market share, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 99, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Co) must be used with a third-person verb: 'companies'.
Suggestion: companies
...y produces more jeans than the Mango Co company in most months, the exception is July a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1043.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 209.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99043062201 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56139327959 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535885167464 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0761214943 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.3 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282621505041 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134503316747 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16417249682 0.0843802449381 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231026510256 0.15604864568 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.199162832505 0.0819641961636 243% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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