The Oxford AstraZeneca Vaccine has probably saved more live than other
The type of Corona Virus Diseases-19 vaccines delivered to human in the world from 2020 to 2021 is illustrated in the graph.
Overall, many people choice AstraZeneca as their vaccine to prevent their body from Covid-19, while Moderna showed the reverse. In addition, Sinovac steadily increased and reach the second position, while the others showed the similar trend.
Initially, AstraZeneca is the most favorite option for people to handle the Covid-19 outbreak, it is gradually increased from 0,1 billion in beginning of 2021 and reach its peak to 2,3 in the middle of 2021. while Moderna becomes the unfavorable figures, although it is had a similar trend from 0,1 to 0,5 in the end of period.
For Pfitzer, it was dramatically increased from 0,2 in the end of 2020 to around 2 in the middle 0f 2021. Compared to Sinopharm, it was still in the bottom position in the beginning of the 2021, but it was steadily increased and reach its peak at around 2 in the end of period.
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| 2021-12-31 | Ahmad Gelora Mahardika | 56 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 209, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: While
... its peak to 2,3 in the middle of 2021. while Moderna becomes the unfavorable figures...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, second, still, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80588235294 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63907947672 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3136790716 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.714285714 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.062158129459 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0312117117228 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302718473936 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0428102047015 0.15604864568 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348406156586 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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