Research into new types of medicine and treatments are essential for improving health and dealing with diseases.
Who do you think should fund this research: private companies, individuals or governments?
Investments in medical research play an important role in healthcare. To answer the question of who should take the responsibility to raise funds for the operations of the studies, I lean towards the idea of the integration of the government and private corporations.
There is a regulation that emphasizes on the mission of the government to guarantee public health of their people. That to be said, the government themselves should be one pioneer to combat trying circumstances, such as the Covid-19 pandemic, for the sake of the residents. Therefore, as leaders of a country, the authorities are supposed to budget for medical studies. However, governmental funding towards medicine are usually seen insufficient, since the officials are also responsible for allocations of other aspects. It would expectedly be a deficit as long as there is only the government to count on when it comes to funding.
On the other hand, private companies should not take full charge of sponsoring medical research. This is attributed to the fact that communal health would hardly be the ultimate target of pharmaceuticals, instead, their works usually revolve around profit-driven strategies. Consequently, launched products may involve severe side effects or take no effects at all, serving few purposes of curing ailments and saving lives. The upside of independent companies may lie in their higher investment that the government. Apparently, most private firms are merely in it for the money, they would ensure that their money is in good hands by the time the project is started.
In conclusion, considering benefits and drawbacks of both the government and private companies regarding fund raising and their final goal, I would opine that research into medicine should be taken under the coordination of the two.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, consequently, however, may, regarding, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40234375 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1003101809 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58984375 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9446665888 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225343104263 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763150611351 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619254765522 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143241683132 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0473665228236 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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