People should take time to relax with hobbies or physical activities that are
very different from what they do at work.
For me, I disagree with the following statement. That is, I believe that people should spend time relax with hobbies that are related to their career. My reasons are as follows.
First of all, people relax because they want to refresh their mind after long periods of working. Thus, if they establish hobbies that are similar to their work, it can help them feel more relieved. Take my friend Todd as an example. Todd is a computer engineer, and he always play video games that are quite similar to programming, such as Baba is You, and so on. As a result, since all he need is some basic programming skills to enjoy his game, he can solve these puzzle games in an extremely short period of time without feeling too stressed. However, if he choose a hobby that is unrelated to programming, such as chess or Chinese go, he had to spend several hours learning those skills during his free hour, which means that he may feel under a lot of pressure when playing them. If this is the case, then what is the point of relaxing in the first place?
In addition, people focus a lot on their schoolwork, so if they have to select a hobby, I believe that hobbies that are highly correlated to their studying will come to their mind first. For instance, when I was studying in university, I was a member of the science club, and I learned several advanced science concepts by playing around several chemistry and biology experiments. Most importantly, since I was a biology major student, these knowledge turned out to be quite useful in many courses that I took, such as Microbiology, Organic-Chemistry, etc. However, if I built a hobby unrelated to my school work, such as playing football or learning violin, I might learn nothing when I was relaxing. Moreover, those skills seemed, apparently, to have little to do with my academic performance.
Last but not least, saving money is crucial for most people, and adopting a hobby related to one's career can help them save a large amount of money. For instance, my mother is a classical music teacher, and one of her hobbies is playing jazz and modern piano at her own house. As a result, since she already possesses one piano, she can save thousand of dollars buying instruments. Moreover, she does not need to spend approximately 50 dollars per day taking a piano course, because she already know how to play it. However, if she is a math teacher, she definitely need to allocate a great deal of money buying a piano and piano lessons.
In conclusion, I maintain that developing a hobby related to one's own job is better due to the three reasons mentioned above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...d is a computer engineer, and he always play video games that are quite similar to p...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...hese puzzle games in an extremely short period of time without feeling too stressed. However, ...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'chooses'.
Suggestion: chooses
...ut feeling too stressed. However, if he choose a hobby that is unrelated to programmin...
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Line 5, column 339, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[8]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun chemistry seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'some chemistry'.
Suggestion: some chemistry
...nced science concepts by playing around several chemistry and biology experiments. Most important...
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Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...y, since I was a biology major student, these knowledge turned out to be quite useful in many c...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...people, and adopting a hobby related to ones career can help them save a large amoun...
^^^^
Line 7, column 343, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ready possesses one piano, she can save thousand of dollars buying instruments. Moreover...
^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 496, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
...ing a piano course, because she already know how to play it. However, if she is a ma...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 65.0 43.0788530466 151% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2155.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 462.0 407.700716846 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6645021645 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63618218583 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60855560048 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525974025974 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 12.0 3.51792114695 341% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.3752810783 48.9658058833 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.619047619 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.80952380952 5.45110844103 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167005404999 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518935259862 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606692704629 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974095772109 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675797473813 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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