The illustrations highlight the production of orange juice.
In general, the process consists of around 15 stages from bringing fresh oranges to factory to sending them to supermarket after packaging. Apart from juice, waste of the oranges are sent to animals as a food.
To begin with, oranges are collected and transported to the factory in order to wash them. After this, the oranges which are cleaned, carried to extraction machine. In this stage, the oranges are sent to make fresh juice, the waste of oranges are given to animals. Meanwhile, the fresh juice are passed for packaging to deliver them to supermarkets.
In the second part of the diagram, the fresh juice are brought by refrigerated trucks to evaporation to remove water and they are sent to concentrate juice after that. Next, those are taken to the warehouse to send to factory in order to add water after they are canned. Lastly, they are packaged before delivering them to supermarkets.
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- The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced
- The diagram below shows how orange juice is produced 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 203, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...e of the oranges are sent to animals as a food. To begin with, oranges are collecte...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter this, the oranges which are cleaned, carried to extraction machine. In this s...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, second, while, apart from, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 812.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04347826087 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69171364107 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.624530648 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167254224478 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696758810981 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447085849499 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103576196719 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281668308909 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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