Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.
Concerns about environmental degradation have been around for decades, with climate change and rising sea level being the two most prominent. This essay aims to elaborate on the problems caused by this phenomenon, followed by practical measures to take.
To commence with, the escalation of global warming comes with a plethora of potential threats to humanity. The problem of flooding is alarming. A rise in ocean level of approximately one metre can cause coastal megacities to be annihilated and engulf island nations around the world. The 2011 Tsunami in Japan, which was a haunting disaster for all of humanity, bears perfect testimony to this. Property and human lives were lost, making a profound influence felt until today.
Effective measures must be implemented to ameliorate the situation. First and foremost, infrastructure improvement policies such as construction of flood barriers, embankment or dam rehabilitation need to be put in place. It is also crucial for the government to establish a task force specialising in research on climate change and develop awareness about the threats looming large. Such efforts, however, would be meaningless without actions to put emissions and deforestation under control, most of which come from industrial manufacturing around the world. Legislation needs to be adopted and enforced on a global scale in an attempt to form decisions and change behaviour. Such a solution, combined with a better understanding of the situation by everyone, could go a long way in protecting lives from the imminent threats of global warming.
To encapsulate, despite the rising ocean levels caused by increasing global temperatures, the problem can be solved by utilising flood prevention systems and enhancing awareness. This will pave the way for a peaceful and promising future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44876325088 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07213691052 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1089575636 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.8 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8666666667 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149120294381 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492094050569 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422265890473 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0984967203073 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0377529243724 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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