Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicles for travelling purposes.
What are the reasons of this increasing trend? Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this.
These days, it is apparent that travelling by private transportation has become a growing trend. There are several reasons for this upward tendency.
Firstly, travelling by one's own vehicle is undeniably comfortable. This is due to the fact that travellers do not have to share their space with anyone else. Additionally, it goes without saying, most people would prefer using something they are familiar with rather than sitting in a vehicle which they are not acquainted with at all. Since the vehicles are furnished exclusively for personal uses, people can feel more secure. Secondly, using personal transportation for commuting brings about conveniences and flexibility. When people travel by their own vehicles, they are more active and able to adjust their schedules independently. For example, when going on a tour, a person with his own vehicle can freely make up his mind of where to visit and what time to depart. On the contrary, when joining a group of tourists and sharing the same means of transportation, he would have to follow the set timetable without being able to decide for his own trip. This is the reason why using personal vehicles for commuting purposes is considered particularly effective. As a result, it has become a trend.
On the other hand, this new tendency also has several downsides. For example, it might contribute to traffic jams. This results from the fact that the more people use personal vehicles the sheerer the volume of traffic. As a consequence, it has not only destructive impacts on people’s lives but also on the environment. This is due to an increase in the carbon footprints.
In conclusion, although using private means of transport can bring about many conveniences such as comfort and self-sufficiency, it can also be disadvantageous unless utilized sensibly.
- Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicles for travelling purposes What are the reasons of this increasing trend Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this 61
- Almost everybody nowadays is found using personal vehicles for travelling purposes What are the reasons of this increasing trend Explain what negative outcomes may be faced in the society due to this 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15878378378 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0032985731 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6134633391 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4444444444 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38888888889 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289187538362 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094071041177 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069159683568 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157310917114 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714693091608 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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