In many countries, major cities have become too big and overcrowded. Why is it happening? Give the solution to this problem.
It is true that many major cities are expanding bigger and the residents are growing larger. There are a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation.
There are two primary reasons why the metropolis increases exponentially in size and population. One reason is that downtowns are places in which people can seek high-paid job opportunities. Such large corporations as Viettel and FPT have their headquarters in major cities, which leads to the fact that numerous people flee from rural areas to urban ones, explaining the overpopulation of those regions. Furthermore, the metropolis offers a great transportation system which is an advantage that attracts immigrants to move to big cities. As a result, urban areas are quickly filled with people coming from various regions of the country.
Fortunately, there are several measures that can be taken to prevent this problem. The first solution would be to open more chances to find a well-paid job. For instance, the government can expand more industrial zones that can increase the number of jobs for labor workers, which means decreasing the overcrowdedness of the metropolis. The second measure would be enhancing the transit system. When people can reach their destination within a few minutes, they may not need to migrate to central cities which would solve the problems of overpopulation of urban areas.
In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for the expansion and the overpopulation of the metropolis, and steps that need to be taken to tackle this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, may, second, so, well, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20622568093 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92207795398 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575875486381 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5256816528 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.923076923 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138030787598 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489928082027 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430369259548 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914564043874 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434369598021 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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