The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the Internet and what solutions can you suggest?
It is true that the widespread presence of the Internet has changed the way people acquire and convey information. Several problems have resulted from this tendency and they should be tackled by a number of effective solutions from government and individuals.
With the advancement of the Internet, several related problems can be anticipated. Firstly, children can access dangerous sites easily. For instance, children need only an account and a claim to be an adult to access a pornography sites. It is undeniable that this has detrimental impacts on their thought and development. Secondly, the risk of personal data leak as the growth of cyber criminals. For example, online banking transactions or online shopping may make private information stolen by hackers. Therefore, lack of knowledge about how to secure online information can be dangerous.
Fortunately, several measures should be taken to alleviate these problems. The first solution would be that parents can play a vital role in educating their children how to use the Internet properly. Children should be restricted to access certain websites which contain inappropriate contents. The second solution would be the government should improve cyber security to prevent the increase of cyber criminals. For instance, a system of online identification with two-factor can be built to enhance the security of personal information.
In conclusion, the advancement of the Internet can cause various negative consequences for both children and adults, these can be alleviated with child education and improvement of cyber security. This is a joint effort by both the government and individuals which can hopefully address this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53846153846 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03884126157 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557692307692 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6276339933 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151891665582 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548254062169 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586239182829 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106458339234 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0226844163368 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.