Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The traditional culture is very crucial for some people because they believe that it is a way to sustain
a traditional way of life. In contrast, recently, other people have lost enthusiasm in preserving the
traditional culture of their country or region. This essay will discuss these two points of view and balance
between them.
The people who are very interested in the traditional culture way of life are very proud and cannot easily
accept any changes and they teach their children the traditions to keep the traditions without any
variety and not to be erased from the minds of the people.
On the other side, the new generation of people lose their enthusiasm in the traditional culture because
of many factors. For instance, people who travel repeatedly will have a mixed traditional culture of
their original country and the other country that they reside in it because meeting new people.
Another reason is the internet which made people keen to try a different traditional culture of other
countries and that make them less interested in their old culture. Other factor is the new inventions
which led people to use them instead of the old ways. For example, jewelry and accessories and clothes
with its own designs and colors which are made in factors are the replacement of the old traditional
handmade accessories and clothes.
In other words, the traditional culture has its own benefits and drawbacks. As long as it is helpful for
people then it is a good thing. Otherwise, it will affect people negatively and will be forgotten.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07279693487 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64283400371 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486590038314 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4784624885 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.75 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4299847008 0.244688304435 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.168984215976 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0999287491447 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143704548953 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891929348873 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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