More and more people are seriously overweight. Some people suggest the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the rise of convenience comes an increase in unhealthy lifestyles and eating habits. Multiple health problems may result as a result. It has been suggested that in order to address these issues, the government should increase the tax on fattening foods. However, I'm not on board with this idea.
There has been an increase in the number of people who are either overweight or obese in recent years. The fattening foods commonly referred to as "fast food," such as French fries, soft drinks, and hamburgers, are thought to be a factor. These foods are widely available, low-cost, and well-liked by a wide range of people. They are unable to resist these temptations. They end up putting on weight as a result. However, a sedentary or otherwise unhealthy way of life is the primary cause of obesity. Sitting for long periods of time is common when doing work or playing games on computers or smartphones, for example. As a result, their bodies will be more likely to store fat, which can lead to a wide range of weight-related health issues. In order to prevent obesity-related diseases, they should eat fast food in moderation and engage in regular exercise. People's weight problems may be reduced more effectively if they are taught about healthy eating and exercise habits through the media or in schools. They will be able to weigh the benefits and drawbacks of the problem and make an informed decision about how to proceed.
Increasing the price of fattening foods may, in theory, reduce consumer demand. Fast food, on the other hand, is a major source of income and employment for many countries. The government may face a variety of negative consequences if this industry's output decreases.
A positive outlook on life and a realistic view of dieting are the best ways to keep weight gain at bay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1519.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93181818182 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73948063954 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603896103896 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.0219799859 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9473684211 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2105263158 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52631578947 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191808091027 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496283737164 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478343764148 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925130813012 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554160844929 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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