Take a look at the question and the graph:
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
apparently the line graph gives infromation about the number of the UK residents going embarked from the UK and overseas residents visiting the UK over the period given above. Also the bar chart gives some infromation about how many UK residents have travelled to the most five trendy and popular countries in the 1999 knowing that the units of measurements are in millions.
Overall, the amount of people who visited the UK gradually raised over the years. the same trend can be noticed in the british people who went aboard. the chart mentioned some information about france that they are the most popular country to visit by the UK residents in 1990.
In 1979, from about 13 to 20 million british travelled to forgein contries. on the other hand the numbers of trips taken aboard by the UK residents rose beyond the given period and reached the high of about 50 million visitors in 1999. Otherwise, the number of the non-UK residents visiting britain reached for only ebout 27 million in 1999.
France was the trend country to be visited by british peopple, it saw approximately 12 million visitors in 1999. which where about 3 million more than spain. noticing that less than 4 million UK residents travelled to the USA, Turkey and Greece although Turkey was the least popular with nearly 3 million british tourists.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Apparently
apparently the line graph gives infromation about ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ing the UK over the period given above. Also the bar chart gives some infromation ab...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...the UK gradually raised over the years. the same trend can be noticed in the britis...
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Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... in the british people who went aboard. the chart mentioned some information about ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: On
... british travelled to forgein contries. on the other hand the numbers of trips tak...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Which
...roximately 12 million visitors in 1999. which where about 3 million more than spain. ...
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Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...roximately 12 million visitors in 1999. which where about 3 million more than spain. ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Noticing
... where about 3 million more than spain. noticing that less than 4 million UK residents t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85840707965 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44008796761 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517699115044 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 327.6 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5792509816 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323720096858 0.215688989381 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12647203478 0.103423049105 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830695250704 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201065876714 0.15604864568 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.084006802479 0.0819641961636 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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