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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph shows visits to and from the UK from 1979 to 1999, and the bar graph shows the most popular countries visited by UK residents in 1999.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
These two figures show to us Line graph and bar chart Respectively, which Line graph talks about people who traveled into United Kingdom in one thousand nine hundred seventy nine until one thousand nine hundred ninety nine and bar chart that illustrates the Most public countries see United Kingdom specifically in one thousand nine hundred ninety nine.
Overall , the present Line graph have a similarity in percentage of Human who outed and visited the United Kingdom by overseas inhabitants in at the beginning of the specified date, but in the last of particular time, the difference in number of this line graph became too high, in otherwise the bar chart elucidate generality of folk countries,whersse France is the highest country visited and Spain is less than it with small variation , Whilst Turkey is the lowest number of visitors.
The clarified Line graph puzzled out in one thousand nine hundred eighty four to one thousand nine hundred ninety nine, which tt witnessed increasing of abroad guests rocketly from almost eighteen millions to approximately fifty three millions.
The bar chart illuminated in one thousand nine hundred ninety nine the most popular countries visited in this year such as: Greece which had nearly three millions of visitant, in addition to another country like USA is more than Greece by one million indicating that USA had four millions callers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 167, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: seventy-nine
...ed Kingdom in one thousand nine hundred seventy nine until one thousand nine hundred ninety ...
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Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: ninety-nine
...ty nine until one thousand nine hundred ninety nine and bar chart that illustrates the Most...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: ninety-nine
...ecifically in one thousand nine hundred ninety nine. Overall , the present Line graph ha...
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Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...and nine hundred ninety nine. Overall , the present Line graph have a similarit...
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Line 3, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , whersse
...t elucidate generality of folk countries,whersse France is the highest country visited a...
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Line 3, column 438, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ain is less than it with small variation , Whilst Turkey is the lowest number of v...
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Line 5, column 67, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: eighty-four
...uzzled out in one thousand nine hundred eighty four to one thousand nine hundred ninety nin...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: ninety-nine
...ighty four to one thousand nine hundred ninety nine, which tt witnessed increasing of abroa...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: fifty-three
...most eighteen millions to approximately fifty three millions. The bar chart illuminate...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to approximately fifty three millions. The bar chart illuminated in one thousan...
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Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: ninety-nine
...lluminated in one thousand nine hundred ninety nine the most popular countries visited in t...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: 'three million'.
Suggestion: three million
...s year such as: Greece which had nearly three millions of visitant, in addition to another countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1170.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 225.0 196.424390244 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64214370607 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546666666667 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 283.868780488 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 22.4926829268 249% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.4609722477 43.030603864 210% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 292.5 112.824112599 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.25 22.9334400587 245% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.25 5.23603664747 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173775245826 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110597883989 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398685795586 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110597883989 0.15604864568 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398685795586 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.2 13.2329268293 236% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 61.2550243902 24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 10.3012195122 244% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.77 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 11.4329268293 249% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.9970731707 222% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 11.0658536585 262% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.