Some people think that having ambitious is a good quality. Is it important to be ambitious ? Is it a positive or negative characteristics ?
In this contemporary epok, majority of individuals think that, having a goal in life is a better quality. In my point of view, it is not only a crucial for individuals, yet also for upcoming generation. It is entirely positive impression. Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To commence, the importance of ambition in life. First and foremost, individuals do not have particular goal in their life thus they are unable to achieve success. Because, life without ambitious is aimless. To be more precise, without setting goals, people are not viable to work with enthusiasm and hardwork. They only do that work which is sufficient and enough for their fulfillments. Whereas, individuals who set their ambitions they do a lot of efforts to achieve their goals. To epitome, the Cristian Ronaldo said in his interview, he had a dream to become famous football player. Thus, now he is a popular player with his hardwork and practice. Therefore,if people have goal then they must get success in their life.
Moving further to positive aspect, individuals must necessity to prepare a planning behalf of their goals which they want to do in future. To elucidate, if masses make a planning for future even they know about their goals or ambition. Due to which, they focus more on their goals. For instance, parents teach their children what they do in future. However, in higher standards pupil choose particular stream in which they are more interested. They know about their goals viz, in medical stream they become doctor, in commerce pupils become businessmen. As a result, they focus towards their career and also guide their children to choose particular goal and ambition.
To recapitulate, ambitious in life play a prominent role in life of individuals which assists to focus on career and get success in life which results to positive impression.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05501618123 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77098256628 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517799352751 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3775217312 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.380952381 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7142857143 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0859523745303 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326010425858 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417580494735 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064106881076 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330091070583 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.