Today family members eat fewer meals together.
Why is this?
Is this a positive or negative trend?
According to statement, in recent eras, most of families hardly sometimes eat meals together. Hence, there are plenty of reasons due to which this criteria is happened. In my opinion, this is overall positive trend. Couple of views are explained in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in past decades, traditional families get meal together for all times. However, in modern era, first and foremost preference become cheap or expensive restaurants and hotels so on. Because, young generation provide preferability toward western cuisine. Due to which, they spend maximum time with peers at such food sites instead of with family. Additionally, another concern is busy hectic schedule in accordance to advanced era. In this criteria, most of individuals stuck in their work. Therefore, they do not become viable to manage time for family meals because of burden of overwork. Thus, they usually spend time at office sites. Apart from that, socialisation is once more prominent factor which promote masses to avoid meal with family. Because, they prefer to go on public sites for meals with peers and promote posting and sharing of memories on social media to reveal their status.
Furthermore, this phenomenon is negative aspect for families, however, it represents overall positive impression socially. Firstly, when individuals reduce time for families, thus they may face physiological problems. Because, without companionship of family members, this may lead towards stress and various mental issues which also includes distraction of bonding. As a result, thus represents adverse impact on health growth. However, there are also another ways via which individuals become close to family and opening up to society beyond meals. Because, in contemporary settings, masses travel one nation to another which leads to make novel friends. Hence, they become socially open and prefer to communicate with another masses. Thus, they interact with them and fill vacant space of life with memories of such peers. As a result, this shows positive trend.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that, there are various noticeable reasons and positive aspects because of which meal with family become fewer for present generation. Yet, it is still important to spend enough time with family members to balance bonding.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...According to statement, in recent eras, most of families hardly sometimes eat meals together. He...
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Line 1, column 143, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...here are plenty of reasons due to which this criteria is happened. In my opinion, th...
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Line 2, column 197, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...expensive restaurants and hotels so on. Because, young generation provide preferability...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...edule in accordance to advanced era. In this criteria, most of individuals stuck in ...
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the individuals') or simply say ''most individuals''.
Suggestion: most of the individuals; most individuals
...ance to advanced era. In this criteria, most of individuals stuck in their work. Therefore, they do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, apart from, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44846796657 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66728764531 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590529247911 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 620.1 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7192664954 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.24 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.36 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234826905166 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694205795298 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858169107002 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165916252032 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626095197255 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.