Topic: Today, many people want to get married and have children at their thirty rather than when they are young. Is this a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, it is said that many people would rather be married and have kids late than when they are in their younger ages. In my opinion, this trend is showing promising signs.
To begin with, in our thirty, we are capable of raising our children properly. Today, lots of people are working hard and putting aside when they are young in order to be financially sustainable. Therefore, when they get married, their kids will be sufficiently provided with education, healthcare, etc. Over and above, people who have lived for over 30 years have gone through many ups and downs in life, hence this helps them to fulfil their parental tasks and raise their children to become responsible as well as a well-behaved citizen for the community.
Last but not least, a late marriage hardly leads to divorce. Since people are mature enough to determine whether they would spend the rest of their life with a person who would later become their spouse. A divorce could badly affect our society. Children can be afflicted with enduring psychological problems due to the lack of caring and responsibility from their parents. However, when there is a decline in the divorce rate, the economy can significantly develop. As the government doesn't have to organize benefits programs for single moms or dads to bring up their children.
To sum up, marriage and having kids at the age of thirty are getting more and more popular these days. It is considered a potential change in our society.
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- Topic Today many people want to get married and have children at their thirty rather than when they are young Is this a positive or negative development 61
- Today many people want to get married and have children in their thirty rather than when they are young Is this a positive or negative development 56
- Topic Today many people want to get married and have children at their thirty rather than when they are young Is this a positive or negative development 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...ignificantly develop. As the government doesnt have to organize benefits programs for ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, so, therefore, well, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88844621514 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55679444271 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625498007968 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.504507431 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.6428571429 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9285714286 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341894781327 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933352175777 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823622380888 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197419321572 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073330910153 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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