Families who send their children to private schools should not be
required to pay taxes that support the state education system.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
People believe that parents of children who attend private school do not need to contribute to the state education system. In my opinion, I completely do not agree with the view.
First of all, each person is a part of the society so we are all responsible with the places where we are living. In orther words, we should have responsibility to complete any taxes for social services even we do not use those so as to make the community better. For example, while our children do not be taught by teachers in public school, you still support the state education system that definetely make a well- educated environment in your community and you can expect to reduce socila evils such as theft, crime, prostitution, bulling, etc....How will you be happy when you live in healthy environment like this.
Secondly, each resident who is willing to pay taxes for public services will create a balance. For instance, while parents will not pay for the state education system by their children studying in private school, the poorer families must pay higher. Moreover, it would be difficult to caculate the correct amount of tax reduction for those families who their children study in private school and the staff would be required to manage the complex process.
To sum up, I disagree that parent should not contribute to the state education system while their children do not take part in study there. Opposite, they should pay taxes to make a balance and a responsibility .
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ocial services even we do not use those so as to make the community better. For example,...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: How
...t, crime, prostitution, bulling, etc....How will you be happy when you live in heal...
^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s to make a balance and a responsibility .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87250996016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60567473341 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8035271507 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451808773978 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16884113143 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877869888244 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273698880287 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371041593661 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ocial services even we do not use those so as to make the community better. For example,...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 550, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: How
...t, crime, prostitution, bulling, etc....How will you be happy when you live in heal...
^^^
Line 4, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...s to make a balance and a responsibility .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1223.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87250996016 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60567473341 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541832669323 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.8035271507 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.3 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451808773978 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16884113143 0.084324248473 200% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877869888244 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273698880287 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371041593661 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.