Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be beneficial to children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
When the topic regrading television and video games there are dual opinion.some are of the notion that this can be valuable for the Juvenile; whereas others think that it has unfoverable consequences on children.prior to my opinion both view would be discussed further.
Discussing the former opinion the supporter explain that they can gain extra knowledge from television. Children watch documentary or other news related channels they can aware with the latest trend in their area also get to know about social skills.To add to this playing computer games is good for children.it enhances congitive skills.this type of activitiy require different level of strategy analytics skills and brain storming.it has sharpen their mind and boost attitude towards the spirit.
On the contrary the proponents of letter view claim that it has wrong effect on them.to begin with children because violence to seeing such programs relating to crime activity. nowadays on television always telecast offens and illegal activity program such as consuming drugs ciggerate or so on. moreover this can distractive to student from their studies. The audio and visual mediq has a great visualisation and sound effect and so they may find accedemics books boring. It directly impact on their results of learning.
In conclusion it can be stated that time spent on television and video games can be effective for children as a source of entertainment also it has bed effect on them. I believe that it can be overcome by judicial use of time and keep observation on children by their parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, whereas, in conclusion, such as, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19291338583 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77483096771 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633858267717 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.2103321232 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.9 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342648028528 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117813007915 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10429288615 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212059595844 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109089944168 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.91 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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