In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour.What do you think are the causes of this
What solutions can you suggest?
Nowadays, having serious disagreements with students and their behaviour is a major concern of schools in many countries.In this essay, i will bring some possible reasons and some methods to tackle this issue
The first major cuase links to their parents.Beacuse, they are the main responsible people who care about their children and control their education process.But, most parents, now, tend to spend less time to their children.That results in children's freedom to do whatever they want.Also , parents usually satisfy them with finance not with care
Another reason for this problem is related to student's surrounding.Friends , relatives, familiars have crucial effects on learner's behaviour.They can easily lead them either to right way or wrong.If others smoke, drink, youth imitiate them and claim that whey they are doing is their business.
There are some workable ways to deal with this problem.The best way is maximizing the number of psychology lessons.Teachers also should teach students with not only math, languages, art but also with linking them with psychology.During the lesson, it is too tedious to pay attention to only numbers or something about subject, students should be given a break and in this break, teachers works with them psychologically.Also, schools should do co-operation with professional psychologists.What useful is that, they can widen student's horizone , sharpen their mind.
To sum up, having a detrimental behaviour among student is big problem in community.Before it deteriorates ,government, school, parents should feel responsibility and collaborate in order to solve this issue and prevent it from happening.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.676 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40716964823 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 83.0 20.2975951904 409% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 253.272361084 49.4020404114 513% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 473.0 106.682146367 443% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 83.3333333333 20.7667163134 401% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 7.06120827912 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243484450036 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162356313305 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022305259389 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134393684562 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541907922632 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 47.0 13.0946893788 359% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.77 50.2224549098 -25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 35.7 11.3001002004 316% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.85 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.17 8.58950901804 142% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 35.2 10.1190380762 348% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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