The maps show the village of Pebble Ton 20 years ago and now
The map illustrates a number of changes which took place in Pebbleton village between 20 years ago and the present time.
It is clear that the village in Pebbleton was renovated completely after the expansion of the village and the addition of several facilities
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Looking at the map in more detail, 20 years ago, there were a lighthouse, an old ford and an accommodation area to the north of the village. In addition, on the left side of the island, a flat studio was situated while there was a playing field next to it. Moreover, the roadbridge connected two banks of the map. Finally, a school was on the bottom of the layout
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As can be seen from the map, after twenty years, the old fort was knocked down and gave way to the children’s playground while the community center was constructed next to it. The map witnessed an expansion of the residential area while the film studios were converted into flats. Additionally, a new footpath and a tennis court was built to the south of the map.
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| 2022-02-08 | An Bui | 73 | view |
| 2021-06-01 | Nabeel Raja | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, moreover, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 32.9175257732 12% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66292134831 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68203902532 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 250.2 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 8.0 0.824742268041 970% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9542308198 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2222222222 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209138139498 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086310395467 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.085795512511 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146361192174 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0804816175974 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.