With the evolution of the civilizations in the past centuries, various aspects of the societies have undergone significant transformation including human
nature. In the contemporary world, no doubt, people are becoming self-centered and more materialistic which is the direct result of forgetting about old ways of life and values. I do believe that by reviving ancient values of living, we can once again make others as well as our own lives much better.
The most prominent reason for this phenomenon in the society is the increased competition among the people in this modern world. Every individual is keen to achieve set targets in life by leaving others behind and this ultimately turn people into self-centered beings. Besides this, the hunger for success and luxurious life can lead the persons to be more materialistic. While chasing their dreams, sometimes, people completely discard ethical values such as honesty, humbleness and politeness. For instance, some of the people who run multinational companies can go to any extent to enhance their profits and they do it at the cost of damaging environment or be-fooling customers.
In earlier times, mostly people used to live in joint families and traits like co-operation and being respectful towards others were prevalent among them.
Despite the scarcities of resources, old generation used to have the quality of remaining satisfied with whatever it had. Though the negative traits of greed and egotism may have been prevailing in those times,however, those were not as common as today among the masses. Moreover, lives were quite simpler and people were not much ambitious as they are in this fast-paced era. so, valuable traditions of the past do have their significance in today's world.
Presently, young generation can learn from those old values of life to be selfless and courteous towards others. Certainly, those will help us to make our society a place worth-living and more peaceful. More so, children can learn how to be better human beings if moral values from the past are inculcated in them. In my opinion, conventional values do have meaning in today's self-centered lives.
To conclude, returning to our traditions which positively contribute to the welfare of the society should be considered seriously. It would be appreciable if people start following those beautiful customs in present times.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, as to, for instance, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2018.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32453825858 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93202413828 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577836411609 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 630.0 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.353514421 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 106.210526316 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.52631578947 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237944674528 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0674277220697 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275727713459 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102545197942 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269239242478 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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