The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates air pollution levels from four countries, namely China, America, Japan and Australia, by various sources (electricity generation, transport and industry) in 2021.
Overall, China causes the highest air pollution whereas Australia produces the least.
To begin with, the industries in China is the highest contributor with 80 PPM followed by transport and electricity having about 70 PPM and around 60 PPM respectively. Japan follows a similar trend to China but in lesser quantities, with industries being in the lead with almost half the amount of the latter, followed by transport which contributes 30PPM. Meanwhile electricity generates a quarter amount of the pollution as compared to China.
In America, the largest source of pollution is transport which accounts to slightly less than 60PPM where as electricity and industries produces almost half of that of transport. Australia generates the least amount of pollution in all three sectors amounting to slightly less than 20PPM.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Meanwhile,
...d by transport which contributes 30PPM. Meanwhile electricity generates a quarter amount ...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ch accounts to slightly less than 60PPM where as electricity and industries produces alm...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 861.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59090909091 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89028155054 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564935064935 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0936332245 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0922863685649 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559592350392 0.103423049105 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506725633014 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830719508553 0.15604864568 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507797577931 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.