You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2021.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.
The bar chart illustrates the degree of air pollution in different countries in 2021 and the reasons behind the pollution of air.
Three causes of air pollution are mentioned as generation of electricity, mode of transportation and industrial activity in four countries: China, America, Japan and Australia in 2021. The X-axis represents pollution level in PPM and the countries are mentioned in the Y-axis.
China created the most polluted air whereas Australia was the least polluted country in 2021. 80 PPM polluted materials was caused by industrial actions, followed by vehicles (70 PPM) and electical production (less than 60 PPM) at China. On the other hand, Australia managed to keep the air pollution levels less than 20 PPM.
In the USA, transportation alone caused less than 60 PPM polluted materials while, around 30 PPM (more or less) pollution was resulted from production of electricity and industry. Although, electricity factories caused less than 20 PPm in Japan, industrial pollution was beyond 40 PPM and cars and other vehicles produced 30 PPM polluted air.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29069767442 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91508172445 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517441860465 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9281396769 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.75 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163107031012 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104237369499 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510261181647 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137089978975 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491071206436 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.