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You organized a party for a 90th birthday party in a hotel for a relative; many elderly guests attended this party which is of great success.Write a letter to thank the hotel manager. In your lettergive the details of the partythe reason why the party was 73
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You want to improve your knowledge of a foreign language which can help you at work Write a letter to a foreign language teacher and say Where did you hear about the teacher Why do you want to learn a foreign language Ask some questions about the course 11
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Based on the about of report ,I have gotten the main idea of some expe...
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...ave gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between...
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...e gotten the main idea of some experts .There is no absolute correlation between the ...
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... of device use and children’s well-being .We are supposed to pay more attention to...
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...f device use and children’s well-being .We are supposed to pay more attention to w...
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... attention to what children are watching ,playing and reading and ensure that the ...
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... ensure that the content is high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join ...
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...s high-quality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible ....
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...ality ,age-appropriate and safe .Besides ,join them as much as possible . Everyt...
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... .Besides ,join them as much as possible . Everything has its two sides .Accordi...
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...ossible . Everything has its two sides .According wo Brewer’s view ,parents shou...
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...sible . Everything has its two sides .According wo Brewer’s view ,parents should join i...
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...ts two sides .According wo Brewer’s view ,parents should join in with their kids r...
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...ther than limit their media consumptions .From where I stand ,as a college student...
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...er than limit their media consumptions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,ac...
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...r media consumptions .From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer...
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...From where I stand ,as a college student ,actually we prefer to accept parent’s pa...
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...pation rather than be controlled by them .Digital devices exist everywhere in our ...
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...tion rather than be controlled by them .Digital devices exist everywhere in our daily l...
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... in our daily life and to a great extent ,we can’t avoid using them if we want to ...
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...t to be successful to complete something .Moreover ,It is impossible for parents t...
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...ccessful to complete something .Moreover ,It is impossible for parents to limit th...
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...it their kid’s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping e...
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...s media consumption forever .As a result ,participating and keeping exposure safe ...
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...t way to deal with the problem like this . To sum up ,Brewer’s view is brilliant...
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...with the problem like this . To sum up ,Brewer’s view is brilliant and rational ...
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...,Brewer’s view is brilliant and rational ,Due to the children’s rebellious psychol...
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... to the children’s rebellious psychology ,I can’t agree more that we need to respe...
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...n we are going to resolve contradictions .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1007.0 1615.20841683 62% => OK
No of words: 195.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1641025641 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03879701817 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.723076923077 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 506.74238477 60% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.161453242 49.4020404114 351% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 335.666666667 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.0 20.7667163134 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613310617698 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0334220892709 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0238636113956 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334220892709 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238636113956 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.4 13.0946893788 270% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 5.5 50.2224549098 11% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.6 11.3001002004 253% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.31 8.58950901804 132% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, moreover, so, well, as a result, to sum up, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments