Dear Nick,
I hope you are doing great and got settled in your new apartment. I am excited to visit your new place, however, I could not as I'm traveling to Toronto for my work. And, I will come back to town after a few weeks.
Since I couldn't come to the party, I have brought a gift which will add as a decorum to your new house. It is a wall clock which could be added to your living room as it is an antique item that I bought from Italy. I hope you will like the present once it will receive at your doorstep from the Blue Dart courier services.
The courier order no is SDA12344, and you can track it with this link bluedart.track.order.com through internet services. You can expect the delivery in the next two days from them as they offer elite delivery services to their customer's doorstep.
You have always a thing for buying special items, especially the ones which are very old. And, I think this antique wall clock will be one of the best collections for your new home.
I can't wait to hear a response from you after seeing the clock.
Best regards,
Shwatank
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...your new place, however, I could not as Im traveling to Toronto for my work. And, ...
^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... to town after a few weeks. Since I couldnt come to the party, I have brought a gif...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...courier services. The courier order no is SDA12344, and you can track it with ...
^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...st collections for your new home. I cant wait to hear a response from you after ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40099009901 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53688117604 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1103026817 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269290732404 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09343124252 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555103352688 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143673801184 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625108329277 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...your new place, however, I could not as Im traveling to Toronto for my work. And, ...
^^
Line 5, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... to town after a few weeks. Since I couldnt come to the party, I have brought a gif...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...courier services. The courier order no is SDA12344, and you can track it with ...
^^
Line 11, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...st collections for your new home. I cant wait to hear a response from you after ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 889.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40099009901 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53688117604 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1103026817 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0833333333 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269290732404 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09343124252 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555103352688 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143673801184 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625108329277 0.0580467560999 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.62 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.