In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is the fact that people now live longer than in the past thanks to the development of health services and higher standard of living, but many countries are facing problems caused by ageing populations. This essay will analyze some issues influenced by this phenomenon and the measures that can be taken to reduce it.
In my opinion, increasing average life expectancy can lead to two main problems. Firstly, a nation will lack labor workforces if there are more oldsters than youngsters in that country. Consequently, a variety of fields in a country could not develop, such as: economic, military, sport and so on. For instance, military power will decline when recruiting rookies meets a lot of difficulties as the number of new soldiers continue to decrease from time to time. Secondly, some burdens can be put on the State budget when the government has to pay pensions and subsidies for the aged too much. Whereas young people are the primary workers have to pay a large amount of taxes to offset the budget deficit.
Ageing populations can certainly be improved. I believe the change must be start with the government, who needs to raise the retirement age up to five years. Thus, the government can save a large amount of money spent for pensions. Besides, they should open more the elderly care centers so that their descendants could devote lots of time to work. Moreover, governments can promote the import of cheap labor from poor countries in the world to replace the shortage of young workers in their countries. Last but not least, a country should encourage couples to have at least two children by some policy like giving gifts or reducing tax for those who have more than one child.
In conclusion, ageing populations may have a bad impact on a country in many aspects. However, some solutions can be used to solve it and the government ought not to neglect this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 593, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, as to, at least, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83692307692 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59677360124 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.015171328 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.25 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0625 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290585320534 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0843235095062 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635597951389 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17841117201 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485490964852 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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