The expansion of the tourism sector is becoming an alarming trend in this modern era. Many developing nations have taken extensive initiatives to expand their tourism facilities and many of them have gained enviable popularity. And, I think this development has brought more advantages to modern society.
There are a certain number of reasons that can justify the growth of the tourism industry. To begin with, due to the technological world and digitalization, the popularity of the different cultures and traditions has been increased around the world. As a result, many travelers desire to visit new destinations to learn about their history, culture, food, and music which shows the growth of the tourism industry. Secondly, the tourism sector brings in foreign money that can be used for the development of the country. For example, emerging nations like India, Thailand, Spain, and many others are earning huge foreign currency from tourism industries. Thirdly, tourism increases the business opportunities for residents and thus may developing countries are having a better trade relationship with developed nations only because the tourists of the western world came to visit such countries and thought about business potentials. Lastly, tourism creates employment opportunities for local people and gives the host country an excellent chance to develop its infrastructure. Therefore, the above reasons can give the grounds of explanations about the expansion of the tourism sector.
In my opinion, this kind of development has brought many beneficial factors to society despite its some negative effects. Chiefly, earning foreign remittance, creating jobs for local people, introducing to new traditions, improving the transportation system, knowing cultural diversity are some of the quite astonishing advantages that the development of tourism can offer. Conversely, the only negative effect according to my view can be the increasing pollution created by the incoming of travelers to popular new destinations in developing countries. For example, Maldives is a well-known place in the Southern Asia continent known for its beautiful beaches and islands and many foreign citizens have added this destination to the bucket list as it has been observed in the recent survey conducted by the International Popular Destinations community.
To conclude, the main reason developing countries are extending their tourism enterprises is that they understand the immense potential and benefits this industry offers without any doubt, and this development is quite a positive outcome for them.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns, improving the transportation system, knowing cultural diversity are some of t...
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Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...system, knowing cultural diversity are some of the quite astonishing advantages that the d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, i think, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64540816327 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9781663752 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8484522339 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3125 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184856856726 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644775954749 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523514634701 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125560699205 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297784624779 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ns, improving the transportation system, knowing cultural diversity are some of t...
^^
Line 5, column 292, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...system, knowing cultural diversity are some of the quite astonishing advantages that the d...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, well, for example, i think, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2213.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64540816327 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9781663752 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553571428571 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 687.6 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.8484522339 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.3125 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184856856726 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644775954749 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523514634701 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125560699205 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297784624779 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.79 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.