Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
people hold happiness in different stage of their life. there is an interesting dabate about teenagers feel more happiness or people are the happiest in their adolescence. Personally, I believe teenage years can remind them the wonderful times. times New Roman",serif;mso-fareast-font-family:"times New Roman"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">
times New Roman"; color:#111111;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">Looking more closely the view which teenage period bring more cheerfulness for people than any times, there are several supportive points for it. Firstly, people who are in this stage of life do not put much more pressure on their shoulder in terms of thinking about their family, finance, education and others. As a result, they may only think about what kind of clothes to buy, how spent the time on enjoying with friends, where they go and anything. By surrounding these atmosphere, they are given the most pleasure times. Secondly, teenagers are supported by their parents according to their wishes other problems. For examle, parents give much more attention their health when they are ill. Even, in that situation may provide them quite delight because of parental care. Lastly, they have much more time to spent on everything. they may go out with their acquaitances anytime, may travel over the world, may participate concerts or other entertaining activities. such kinds of environtment give them satisfaction their life.
times New Roman"; color:#111111;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">Turning to the other view which adolescence provide people with the great times, supporters of the view demonstrate some opinion to advocate it. The first supportive point is that independence in making decision or other situations give them pleasure or happiness. For instance, spending money on anything is in thier hands. Therefore, they can buy their needs, can eat any meals and can wear fashionable clothers. The next adherent view is they suffer the most beautiful times which have never repeated in their other stage of life. Love is such kinds of things can bring the most wonderful days to people life.
times New Roman"; color:#111111;mso-ansi-language:EN-US;mso-fareast-language:RU">Taking everything into consideration, there is always discussion about which time is the most beautiful times of people. Although, some people think about adult feel more happiness, I believe teenagers are overjoyed.
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- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people s lives Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your opinion 56
- Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people s lives Others think that adult life brings more happiness in spite of greater responsibilities Discuss both these views and give your opinion 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2181.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 6.14366197183 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 7.9955472631 2.80592935109 285% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52676056338 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 75.5193657493 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.857142857 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9047619048 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257670193006 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876426098355 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663962392387 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176542154018 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180438078504 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.04 12.4159519038 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.