Task 2: Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis. Wha are the reasons and what can be done to encourage them to spend their time walking?
there is no doubt that walking is the simplest form of exercise to better human’s health. However, nowadays people are becoming less and less walking. In this essay, both reasons and possible solutions will be discussed as below.
there are several explanations for why individuals are not interested in walking. The first reason may be that citizens now have had a variety choices of doing exercise which are more excited and challenging than just simply walk. The second reason is that particularly in big cities the space using for walking is gradually narrowed. The number of parks is not enough for the citizen to walk and additionally sidewalks are taken by motorists and parking. For example, in Vietnam, in the rush hours, thank to traffic jam drivers may take over the footway or stores and shops along both sides of roads would use the footpath in front of their shops for customer’s parking.
some solutions may be taken by the government and each person which can help to tackle this problem. From the authority, funding should be allocated to build more parks and enlarge the footpath from both sides of the road. Furthermore, heavy fines must be applied for those who violate the road of encroachments and park illegally which can be caught by the system of street cameras. Moreover, people’s awareness of the benefits of walking such as simple, convenient, age suitable,… should be advertised on TV and social media in order to attract more people’s intentions.
In conclusion, walking is the simplest method for improving individual’s health and some solutions are proposed to deal with this issue coming from both government and each person.
- Some people are reducing their walks however many health experts say that walking is the best exercise to maintain health Why do people walk less What might encourage people to walk longer distances 73
- Task 2 Fewer and fewer people walk on a daily basis Wha are the reasons and what can be done to encourage them to spend their time walking 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, second, so, for example, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08695652174 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70498617751 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0962755597 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172078326562 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626907732845 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0352217416115 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101004533593 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313981440987 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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