Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment. Why is this? What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles?
In this competitive epoch, multitudes of people prefer private vehicles on daily basis. Despite being aware about the deteriorate effects on atmosphere, people still acquiring and driving it. Because of these are more flexible, comfortable and save the time. To alleviate the usage of these vehicles, the measures will be discussed below as by preferring public transports and car-pooling.
To commence with the prominent reason that vehicles are convenient source of human’s life by providing more comfort and save the time of the individuals. As, in this fast-pace of life, everyone have to commute for long durations due to jobs. While using own vehicles give more secure and comfort zone to anyone. For instance, two-wheelers and four-wheelers help people to reach on time in a very commodious way. Moreover, own vehicles assist a lot to move anywhere or at any time without any restrictions. Using private mode, mankind not merely travel to the destination but also able to do some complementary tasks on the way.
To mitigate the consumption of cars and motorbikes, the government should take strict action regarding this matter to save the environment. The major one is that making public transports more convenient and frequent to everyone, within the economical rates. Besides this, car-pooling is the best remedy to control the contamination of eco-system. In order to this, people from same destination can share the very vehicle, which share their budget as well as reduce the traffic and environmental issues.
To recapitulate, I conclude that whether the usage of private transports is indispensable, still people need to avoid the consumption of these to make the environment clean and green; either by car-pooling or preferring more public transportations.
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- Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones letter writing ability is disappearing To what extent do you agree Write at least 250 words 73
- Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment Why is this What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles 61
- Many people continue to use cars and motorcycles even though they know that they are bad for the environment Why is this What can be done to reduce the use of these vehicles 78
- Due to the use of the computers and mobile phones letter writing ability is disappearing To what extent do you agree Write at least 250 words 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
... daily basis. Despite being aware about the deteriorate effects on atmosphere, people still acq...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, well, while, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35714285714 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0739524514 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2415591447 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196697290756 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0592323438233 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283604428877 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110273794737 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.01921368994 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.