Why do so many young people leave their comfortable homes and studing a completely foreign pleace?
Some people argue that there are many disadvantages of studying abroad such as high expenses and adapatation problems to a new environment one cannot deny that.
However,there are many benefits of studying a broad,there are many reasons.
Firstly,they have a lot of opportunity to develop thier English language nevertheless,there they can hear people speak English all day in many situations.They will have the language from native speakers they can also watch Tv , see films and listin to English radio are at the reach of them hand whenever you want.
The second benefit, they will have lots of responsibilities of their self because when they live in their country so their family will give them money to them or they can borrow it from their friends also,they will care about time because they will live alone so they have alot of work such us studyind,cleaning and cooking so they will organize their time.
The final reason why people choose to stuyd abroad is that people will have more experience in their studing. We cannot forget that,when people return to their country and they take this high education they can help their country and make its economy become increase.
To sum up,studying is important ,and it is not matter where you will learn it the important thing is to learn it in good way that can help and rise your country. Although some people think that it is very difficult and they will have alot of challenges when they do it but if a person really want to improve himself the person will not care about all of this thing because this person has an goal in his/her mind so they want to take it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, really, second, so, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77257525084 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66140105124 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535117056856 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.2005031629 49.4020404114 193% => OK
Chars per sentence: 158.555555556 106.682146367 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2222222222 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0429620866363 0.244688304435 18% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0315169686804 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485207236894 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0359937148768 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503014616382 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.98 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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