Dear Alicia,
It's been almost a year, and we haven't met since our last holiday in the Maldives. It was really great to meet you on my last vacation in the Maldives, and somehow we become good friends.
Anyway, I received a letter last week from you that stated you'll be coming to my hometown for three weeks to meet your new clients. I was so delighted after hearing the news from you that we will be meeting again since we didn't get any chance to see each other for at least more than twelve months.
However, I'm writing today to invite you to stay at my house during your business trip to my city. I'll be happy if you'll be accepting my invitation to homestay at my place while you are on your business trip.
As you'll be coming in the next two months, I'll finish my project earlier and will take planned leaves in advance, so that, we could spend your free time together during weekdays. On weekends, I'll take you to the exquisite destinations nearby the city to explore the cultures and traditions of my country along with stunning views since you like seeing new places and the standard of living of locals. In addition, I'll ensure you that the food will be prepared according to your menu for the entire three weeks at my house as you do not like eating different cuisines.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Warm Regards,
Shain
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...icia, Its been almost a year, and we havent met since our last holiday in the Maldi...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...a letter last week from you that stated youll be coming to my hometown for three week...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... that we will be meeting again since we didnt get any chance to see each other for at...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t more than twelve months. However, Im writing today to invite you to stay at ...
^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e during your business trip to my city. Ill be happy if youll be accepting my invit...
^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...siness trip to my city. Ill be happy if youll be accepting my invitation to homestay ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...e you are on your business trip. As youll be coming in the next two months, Ill f...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...youll be coming in the next two months, Ill finish my project earlier and will take...
^^^
Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... together during weekdays. On weekends, Ill take you to the exquisite destinations ...
^^^
Line 9, column 415, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ndard of living of locals. In addition, Ill ensure you that the food will be prepar...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, really, so, while, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52032520325 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2157119257 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5300137262 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277980506174 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114060150214 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059258442938 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156062950458 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460657421206 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: haven't
...icia, Its been almost a year, and we havent met since our last holiday in the Maldi...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 60, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...a letter last week from you that stated youll be coming to my hometown for three week...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... that we will be meeting again since we didnt get any chance to see each other for at...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...t more than twelve months. However, Im writing today to invite you to stay at ...
^^
Line 7, column 99, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...e during your business trip to my city. Ill be happy if youll be accepting my invit...
^^^
Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...siness trip to my city. Ill be happy if youll be accepting my invitation to homestay ...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 4, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...e you are on your business trip. As youll be coming in the next two months, Ill f...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 44, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...youll be coming in the next two months, Ill finish my project earlier and will take...
^^^
Line 9, column 193, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... together during weekdays. On weekends, Ill take you to the exquisite destinations ...
^^^
Line 9, column 415, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ndard of living of locals. In addition, Ill ensure you that the food will be prepar...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, however, if, look, really, so, while, at least, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52032520325 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2157119257 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605691056911 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5300137262 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.090909091 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3636363636 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 4.34317383033 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277980506174 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114060150214 0.0766984524023 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.059258442938 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156062950458 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460657421206 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.