The chart below shows figures for attendances at hospital emergency care departments in Northern Ireland by age group in December 2016 and December 2017.
The given diagram illlustrate the comparison of attendence at emergency department of hospital of six categories in Ireland between December 2016 and December 2017.
Overall, the percentage of appearance at emergency room by all age groups in 2016 was always higher than in 2017. It is noticed that aged under and aged 75 and over accounted for the largest number on the chart.
In December 2016, the number of people arrive emergency department was a significant difference across age groups . The largest proportion is aged 75 and over category, nearly 65 persons for every 1000 people. Meanwhile, childrens from 5 to 15 age were three time less than aged 75 and over groups, just over 20 attendances per 1000-population in both months. In constrast, there was remain the same in people aged 16 to 44, 45 to 64, 65 to 74 types, approximately 30 attendances per 1000 population in period given.
Looking at the remaining stage, people aged 75 and over and children aged 5-15 were still the greatest proportion and the smallest proportion, a little more than in 2016, roughly 67 per 1000-population and 55 per 1000-population. Finally, the number of people going to the emergency department in aged 16 to 44, aged 45 to 64, aged 65 to 74 groups tended to go up more than in 2016 but it was no difficult, still just about 20 attendances per 1000-population.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...d for the largest number on the chart. In December 2016, the number of people a...
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...significant difference across age groups . The largest proportion is aged 75 and o...
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... largest proportion is aged 75 and over category, nearly 65 persons for every 1000 peopl...
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...in both months. In constrast, there was remain the same in people aged 16 to 44, 45 to...
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...s per 1000 population in period given. Looking at the remaining stage, people a...
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Suggestion: not; now
...d to go up more than in 2016 but it was no difficult, still just about 20 attendan...
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...out 20 attendances per 1000-population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86637931034 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04169239875 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7216837675 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.444444444 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319629631695 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165102238274 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118064614745 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253567845248 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109447666019 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tween December 2016 and December 2017. Overall, the percentage of appearance at...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for the largest number on the chart. In December 2016, the number of people a...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...significant difference across age groups . The largest proportion is aged 75 and o...
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Line 3, column 163, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'category' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'categories'.
Suggestion: categories
... largest proportion is aged 75 and over category, nearly 65 persons for every 1000 peopl...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'remained'.
Suggestion: remained
...in both months. In constrast, there was remain the same in people aged 16 to 44, 45 to...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s per 1000 population in period given. Looking at the remaining stage, people a...
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Line 4, column 397, Rule ID: IT_IS_NO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'not' or 'now'?
Suggestion: not; now
...d to go up more than in 2016 but it was no difficult, still just about 20 attendan...
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Line 4, column 464, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...out 20 attendances per 1000-population.
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.97073170732 353% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1129.0 965.302439024 117% => OK
No of words: 232.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86637931034 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04169239875 2.65546596893 115% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512931034483 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7216837675 43.030603864 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.444444444 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7777777778 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319629631695 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165102238274 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.118064614745 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253567845248 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109447666019 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.