The graph below shows the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.
The given graph depicts the number of inquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city from January to June in 2011. As is shown by the graph, visitor inquiries in person and telephone rose while by letter or email to decreased. Additionally, the number of inquiries sent in person to the highest and by letter or email to the lowest over 6 months.
In January, the inquiries of visitors by telephone reached a peak with over 850 and nearly 800 received by letter/email. Over a 4 month period, from January to April, receive by telephone fluctuated and sharp growth in two months were May and June. Likewise, received in-person rapid an upward trend from 400 to nearly 1900 inquiries.
Whereas, The inquiries by letter/email fall dramatically from nearly 800 received to nearly 400 received in 6 months. From January to march, the number slightly rose and dropped wildly in again tow months. In the last month, the inquiries of visitor remained stable was nearly 400 received.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 335, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rend from 400 to nearly 1900 inquiries. Whereas, The inquiries by letter/email fall dra...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, may, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 32.9175257732 0% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93452380952 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69620518364 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529761904762 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.7228317555 44.8134815571 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.1111111111 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313026326201 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138394316218 0.0766984524023 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127342538307 0.0603063233224 211% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221158754543 0.12726935374 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105362279276 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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