As computers and technology develop, they can be used to teach children and teachers won't be necessory soon. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no doubt that education and learning process has changed since the introduction of computers. Though expert system has made computers more intellegent, they are not yet become a substitute for teachers in the learning process. In my opinion, the disappreance of teachers from the classroom is not possible in the near future.
To begin with, some people believe that, the role of teachers started to fade because, computers have been helping students to progress in their studies quicker than when compered with an original classroom. Computer and the internet bring informations about any...
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Sir..
I am extremely sorry to say that there it a small problem with my mobile. So it is entering the page twice, as result twice saved my essay. I am losing my points some times in the same way. Please forgive me, I tried to repair it..but still it is continuing the same..
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Tessy James
Thankyou Sir.. I too realize
Thankyou Sir..
I too realize the typing mistakes are too much..
I will try to correct it...
Thanks once again...
Tessy James
Sentence: Furthermore, it help them to save their time and provide convenience.
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Sentence: However, I feel, the presence of a teacher is essential for students because the human contact influence them in several ways, positively.
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Sentence: Though expert system has made computers more intellegent, they are not yet become a substitute for teachers in the learning process.
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Sentence: In my opinion, the disappreance of teachers from the classroom is not possible in the near future.
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Sentence: To begin with, some people believe that, the role of teachers started to fade because, computers have been helping students to progress in their studies quicker than when compered with an original classroom.
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Sentence: Some students especially brillent students use this oppertunity to progress in their acquisiton of knowledge at their own pace instead of learning from the teacher.
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Sentence: Firstly, students realize that they are not dealing with a meachine but with a human being, who deserves respect and attention.
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Sentence: They know the strength and weakness of each student and teach them accordingly, including special attention to poor academic pupils, by repeating some explanations, giving extra exercies or even suggesting for a private tutor.
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Sentence: For instance, pupiles try to immitate walking style, mannarisams, dress code and so forth.
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Sentence: A further point is that teachers impart knowlede along with moral values.
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Sentence: Students also learn the importance of studing in group and respect their colleages, which helps them to boost their social skills.
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Sentence: In conclution, the role of a good teacher in learning process is pivotal.
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Sentence: I feel, it will continue in the future because, no matter how sofosticated the computer is, it can't replace human interactions and its positive impacts totally.
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.269 0.35
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No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 92 40
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