In some societies, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. Some people think that regardless of age, teenagers who commit major crimes should receive adult punishment.
To what extend do you agree ?
There is an increasing number of juvenile offenders in many countries. Some people claim that under-aged criminal participating in major illegal activities should be punished as adults. However, my firm conviction is instead of basing on age, judge should impose punishment by considering the motive for crime.
Imposing adult punishment on teenage criminals who commit major crimes contribute greatly to juvenile offender rate reduction. Harsh sanctions, which are fit the crime, could deter other adolescents from engaging illegal activities. They may think twice before turning to a career of crime because of the fear of severe punishment. Therefore, teenage criminal rate could decrease. A perfect instance for this is Le Van Luyen, who was a under-eighteen premeditated murderer and burglar in Vietnam, received capital punishment. And a long time span after that, there were very few major crimes committed by teenagers.
Nevertheless, teenage is a sophisticated and sensitive age, which needs sympathy and tactful treatment. Several adolescents have to receive unpremeditated murder prison sentence due to their protection against children abuse. Numerous unprivileged kids around the globe chose to be rule-breakers as a way of making a living. The rate of children committing minor crimes such as shoplifting or pick pocketing for the purpose of getting food and money to survive is soaring every single day. These illegal activities enforce serious consequences in their development of conscience and lead to worse and major crimes like burglary or drug trafficking in order to earn easy money. Therefore, this kind of teenage criminals should be put on probation and provided education and vocational training instead of being imprisoned as adult criminals.
In conclusion, under-aged criminals have to receive the punishment fit to the crime. Basing on the motive for crime, the sanctions can be harsh and severe as adult or can be a psychology treatment and provide basic skills to ensure they will be normal and valuable people in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4921630094 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98726508946 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608150470219 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.697210382 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.058823529 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7647058824 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88235294118 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320314964218 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957095387651 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701515549833 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190070379357 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0520766660669 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.