Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is argued that hosting countries of global-scale sports events would do great harm to the countries being in charge. In my opinion, however, the appeals to the nations that organise such competitions are more worth considering.
On the one hand, some people have a hostile attitude to hosting an international sports event due to several reasons. Firstly, it would be a huge waste of the national budget since solely the preparation process could cost up to a millions of dollars. For example, not only would the improvement of the place holding the event be taken into serious consideration but also the transportation facilities, especially on the G-day so as to minimize traffic congestion. Secondly, there are certain devastating impacts on the environment to the host country. As a matter of fact, a worldwide sports event is likely to be in need of hundreds of candidates, the board of directors and thousands of staff coming from several neighboring countries. This leads to unavoidable emergence of a great amount of plastic water bottles as well as waste after a match such as towels and bandages.
On the other hand, I adhere to the economic benefits of hosting a global sports event. The main reason is that fans and sport enthusiasts from every part of the world would seize the opportunities to come to the hosting country encouraging their favorite teams, thus facilitating the local economy. In the Olympics Games 2021 taking place in Tokyo, the New York Times recorded an astounding surge in the demand and profits of both Tokyo’s hotels and restaurants while the Games were happening. Another reason is the investment potential from foreign corporations to the hosting country since only cities that are developed and considered centres of the world business would be chosen to hold such a large scale large-scale event . It is the country who host the event will appear on the headlines of press, newspapers and radios which popularize its name and prosperity to the global citizens and attract contracts from enterprises.
In conclusion, while there are a number of negative effects as a result of organising an international sports event, I am convinced that the hosting country would receive more beneficial outcomes.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...he preparation process could cost up to a millions of dollars. For example, not only would...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a million' or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: a million; millions
...he preparation process could cost up to a millions of dollars. For example, not only would...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ion facilities, especially on the G-day so as to minimize traffic congestion. Secondly, ...
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Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...untry. As a matter of fact, a worldwide sports event is likely to be in need of hundre...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e economic benefits of hosting a global sports event. The main reason is that fans and...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...old such a large scale large-scale event . It is the country who host the event wi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90920620314 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573369565217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2913557848 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2142857143 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234707850405 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793707771547 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748033620568 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146231859582 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192429335568 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_HUNDREDS[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. Consider using: 'a million'
Suggestion: a million
...he preparation process could cost up to a millions of dollars. For example, not only would...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a million' or simply 'millions'?
Suggestion: a million; millions
...he preparation process could cost up to a millions of dollars. For example, not only would...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ion facilities, especially on the G-day so as to minimize traffic congestion. Secondly, ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 587, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...untry. As a matter of fact, a worldwide sports event is likely to be in need of hundre...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 74, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e economic benefits of hosting a global sports event. The main reason is that fans and...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 729, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...old such a large scale large-scale event . It is the country who host the event wi...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90920620314 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573369565217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.2913557848 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.714285714 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2142857143 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234707850405 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793707771547 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748033620568 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146231859582 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192429335568 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.