Some countries allow old people to work to any age that they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In today's fast-paced world, several countries have implemented the law allowing the senior citizens to continue working without an exact retirement age. In my opinion, the significant demerits of no restrained working age overshadow several advantages.
On the one hand, there are a number of benefits of this development. To begin with, the overall public health would be improved. If there are money incentives, more people would make an effort to protect their health and keep earning incomes, which encourages an increasing number of intellectual old citizens. Furthermore, the old generation could earn their own money and therefore are less dependent on the care from the younger generation.
On the other hand, I am of the opinion that the shortcomings of this phenomenon eclipse aforementioned benefits. Firstly, the competition level could be greater. In fact, people in the 21st century no longer only compete with other peers but also machines and algorithms. Hence, when more citizens seek jobs at the same time, the unemployment rate might rise due to the insufficient jobs available for everyone. Secondly, this is likely to give a negative spirit to the young generation when they do not have responsibilities to take care of their parents. Some children would take the advantage of this law and force their parents to work so that they only need to cover their expenses without payment for the old’s health insurance and medicines.
In conclusion, while several favourable impacts could be listed, I deem that it is more advisable to have a fixed retirement age to avoid serious drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25096525097 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91776447519 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5070558108 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.615384615 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9230769231 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4615384615 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171851796774 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473808780002 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507660103279 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0900793547287 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498891429922 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.