Educators should take students' interests into account when planning the content of the courses they teach.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The education is most important phase in student's life and for economic growth .The educators must consider all the aspects into consideration when planning the content of the courses they teach. this is because if there is a perfect sorting of courses then it will be helpful for the future of student in becoming what he/she is thinking to be. I strongly agree that the educators should take students' interests into account when planning the content of the courses they teach.
Inaddition , if the course structure is not according to the intrest of the students then most of the young minds will lack in intrest to learn the subject and also creates lack of self-confidence in learning new intresting things . for example , the person who is more intrested in arts and holds lots of medals in it feels difficult to read the science behind rocket rather he/she would be intrested in learning about the history .
Moreover, Apple founder steve jobs dropped out of his school due to irrelevant course which are against his intrest made him feel uncomfortable based on this analogy there may be several students who can be dropped from their schools if it create certain discomfort against the intrests of willingsness to learn.
Although, if educators consider the students intrests while creating the course then students will be benefited from learning the things what they want which decreases the dropping rate of students from the college or university.
Incontrast, One may oppose the educators in building the courses as intrest of students yield a proper future for students but may further increase the dropout rate and decrease the intrest to learn in students.Therefore , it is always encouraged when educators build courses while considering the students needs
Hence , by analysing the elaborated discussion on instrests of students in learing, it is always recommended to include students intrest while building the course structure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for example, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 58.6224719101 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1655.0 2235.4752809 74% => OK
No of words: 314.0 442.535393258 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27070063694 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78688158779 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 215.323595506 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531847133758 0.4932671777 108% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 704.065955056 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 20.2370786517 40% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 23.0359550562 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.173924067 60.3974514979 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 206.875 118.986275619 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.25 23.4991977007 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 5.21951772744 208% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 7.80617977528 192% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24240277328 0.243740707755 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145585676143 0.0831039109588 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.143932680467 0.0758088955206 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136305536666 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105065375968 0.0667264976115 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 14.1392134831 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.35 48.8420337079 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.1639044944 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.8971910112 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 11.2143820225 157% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.