It is often argued that there is nothing can do in a person to enhance the environment, while the governments and huge corporations can affect the environmental change. In my opinion, I believe that although the government and large companies can make a big change, overall individual is the most important key to improve the environment.
The government and huge corporations can make an appreciable change whether impact the environment positively or negatively because they possess powerful power and material. For instance, enact a law that is related to the environment and oblige the public to follow or large companies can buy less emission CO2 machines for production. There is no denying that the government and large corporations have the ability to change the environment easily.
However, individuals also can impact the environment which must be considered, one important issue is the importance and identity of the environment to the people. This means that people's thoughts and actions are very important. Taking China as an example, citizens green the desert in order to prevent desertification and the forest area increased from 6% to 30% after 10 years. Although the government have power authority in law, it can be argued that if no one recognizes the law and implements it that the law is useless.
In conclusion, while government and large corporations can lead environmental change, individuals also are the key to improving the environment. In my opinion, despite a person having little effect on the environment. However, we all come together to maintain the same purpose, it can make a visible change.
- Last week you were on a flight to London Unfortunately when you left the plane you left a bag You did not remember about the bag until you got to your hotel Write a letter to the airline Explain what has happened describe the bag and its contents an 70
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- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are expertimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the cause 61
- In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the countryside Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there What is your opinion 61
- Although abuses of the system are inevitable social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25572519084 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10274356922 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526717557252 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8977975027 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.75 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320255419036 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112943945923 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0818358208752 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201304459273 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0781077174698 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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