The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words
The invention of the international network has significantly revolutionized the way people
exchange and absorb information, but it has also created unprecedented issues. Such problems
are the wide spread of online criminals and unreliable information. The way to cope with this is
to propose strict cybersecurity laws and punish illegal acts heavily.
One of the dangers associated with the development of the world wide web is that users can be
exposed to fake or sometimes dangerous sources of information, also known as “spams”. This
could lead to the fact that users are inaccessible to trustworthy and helpful knowledge that they
are looking for. At the same time, cybercrimes can create harmful toxic pieces of malware
content which can irritate users or even break into users’ their accounts in order to steal
confidential information or money. Another related issue is that tech companies such as
Facebook or Google can track and collect users’ info and utilize it the data for their commercial
purposes, which can be risky. A person’s or organization’s reputation can be ruined if their
information is used for bad reasons such as selling sensitive data to the public.
Fortunately, a variety of steps can be taken in order to alleviate these concerns. To effectively
address cybercrimes, rigorous laws on enhancing cybersecurity should be enacted on a global
scale. At the same time, worldwide cooperation in terms of applying online safety laws is vital,
especially when it comes to demolishing transnational cyberhacker networks. Companies should
also pay attention to improving their safety systems by undertaking regular scans to look for
software vulnerabilities and upgrading the system if necessary. Parents also have a part to play.
They need to closely monitor the activities of their children and restrict their access to certain
tracking sites through parental control software, therefore secure their kid’s digital footprint.
In conclusion, numerous measures could be taken in order to tackle Internet-related concerns as
the rate of online crimes and phishing is increasing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60550458716 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16470176792 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611620795107 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 566.1 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4477266982 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.86666666667 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 23.0 4.38176352705 525% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138694245848 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0440029989235 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0281742645046 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.035545732452 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352005210928 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.26 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.28 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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