The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The chart below illustrates how much leisure time men and women of different employment status enjoy.
Overall, it is evident that the amount of time spent on leisure pursuits per week is the largest among the unemployed and retired, whereas those who work full time tend to have the least free time. In addition, it is noticeable that the time spent on recreational activites is only witnessed among women who are part-time workers or act as housewives in the families.
Men who are unemployed and retired said that they spent around 85 hours a week on their hobbies, while the figures for their female counterparts were slightly lower, at about 79 hours. A similarity can be seen in those working full time, with men reporting 44 hours and women spending 38 hours on leisure activities.
50 hours per week is spent on free time activities among housewives, who do not go to work but stay at home caring for the family and handling household chores. In comparison to this, women taking part-time jobs generally have less leisure time, with only 40 hours a week.
- Write a paragraph of about 150 200 words about the benefits of volunteering 87
- Traffic congestion is becoming a huge problem for major cities What are the main causes of traffic congestion and suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce traffic jams in big cities 78
- Write a paragraph of about 150 200 words about the benefits of volunteering 78
- In natural scenic spots such as lakes mountains and beaches there is much litter or rubbish Why do people do that How to deal with it 94
- Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement Use specific reasons and examples to support yo 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 155, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...yed and retired, whereas those who work full time tend to have the least free time. In ad...
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Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...similarity can be seen in those working full time, with men reporting 44 hours and women ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54468570374 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0329971933 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.571428571 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331753574411 0.215688989381 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186193425482 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.204409185884 0.0843802449381 242% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.268638691188 0.15604864568 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.233589963114 0.0819641961636 285% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.