The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates, protein and fat in three different diets.
The pie chart gives information about the proportion of carbohydrates, protein, and fat in three different diets, namely average diet, healthy diet, and healthy diet for sport.
Overall, there are significant differences between the three substances in these diets.
The number of carbohydrates accounts for the majority of three kinds of diet. It’s noticeable that sportspeople consume the largest amount compared to other groups of dieters. It contains 60% of carbs, which is 10% and 20% higher than the proportion of carbohydrates in the average diet and healthy diet, respectively.
On the average diet, the number of protein accounted for 40%, the same as carbohydrates and double the percentage of fat (only 20%). In a healthy diet, the number of protein is lower than in a normal meal (30 %). The amount of protein in a sports healthy diet is rather modest, just 25%.
And no surprise that fat seemed to be the nutrition that contributes the smallest percentage among these diet types ( 20% for an average and healthy diet, healthy diet for sport is only 15%).
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 234, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a sport' or simply 'sports'?
Suggestion: a sport; sports
...mal meal 30 %. The amount of protein in a sports healthy diet is rather modest, just 25%...
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Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...allest percentage among these diet types 20% for an average and healthy diet, hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05681818182 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80531089603 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 506.74238477 51% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.8084993426 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8888888889 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.777777777778 7.06120827912 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358229988724 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160118867107 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10591893324 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215515520788 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108293142398 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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