The pie chart depicts the proportions of carbs, protein, and fat in three diets: average, healthy, and healthy for sport.
Overall, the three components in these diets have considerable variances.
The majority of three types of diets are made up of carbohydrates. When compared to other types of dieters, sportspeople consume the most calories. It contains 60% carbohydrates, which is 10% and 20% higher than the percentage of carbohydrates in the typical and healthy diets, respectively.
Protein made up 40% of the normal diet, the same as carbohydrates and twice as much as fat (only 20 percent ).Protein content in a healthy diet is lower than in a typical meal (30 percent ). The amount of protein in a sports-friendly diet is rather low, at about 25%.
And it's no surprise that fat appears to be the nutrient that contributes the least to various diet types ( 20 percent for an average and healthy diet, healthy diet for sport is only 15 percent ).
- The table below gives information on the proportion of carbohydrates protein and fat in three different diets 56
- The bar chart below shows the number of students who chose certain university subjects in 2005 Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature and make comparisons where relevant 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 161.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93167701863 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96639565473 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 176.041082164 54% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590062111801 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 506.74238477 45% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4967782435 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.25 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 7.06120827912 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256852604649 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11350659362 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0639205106543 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14623347463 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050935098535 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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