Some hold the view that ideas and informaton should be completely open and there should be no controls on what people can read and watch in the media (TV, newspaper, Internet). Do you agree with this view, or do you think that in some circumstances governments should limit the freedom of the media.
Several people argue that ideas and information should be unrestricted and completely open on all media which readable and can be seen without any boundary from circumstances of the goverments. I am not agree with this statement because we must draw the border and limited for media in some cases. In this essay i will explain more the reason for support my opinion.
Firtsly, without any control media can freely involved personal information their resources, this may ruin person's life and caused depression in certain point because everyone have their privacy and feeling uncomfortable when it becomes public consumption. For instance, some celebrity end up with suicide due the wrong interpretation from media.
Secondly, non-selected information can may have harmful effect for a children. because of the wild and free the information have high possibility for create some negativity in their mind towards the world, children unconscius make trauma and influence their mental health.
On the other hand, when information become restricted especially when it come to political things some community strongly state it will ruin their trust into the goverment, because citizens need to know regarding important things in administration and must be transparant for their awarness to keep them update and stay alert.
In conclusion, even we need information as clear and detail as possible we must consider to put limitation based of content in order to protect people who doesn't related directly without reduce the purpose of the information, especially protect the privacy and clear guidelines information with age limit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 204, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...rcumstances of the goverments. I am not agree with this statement because we must dra...
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Line 1, column 313, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... for media in some cases. In this essay i will explain more the reason for suppor...
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Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a child' or simply 'children'?
Suggestion: a child; children
...rmation can may have harmful effect for a children. because of the wild and free the infor...
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Line 5, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...may have harmful effect for a children. because of the wild and free the information ha...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'comes'?
Suggestion: comes
...on become restricted especially when it come to political things some community stro...
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Line 9, column 81, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider putting'.
Suggestion: consider putting
...as clear and detail as possible we must consider to put limitation based of content in order to...
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Line 9, column 156, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... content in order to protect people who doesnt related directly without reduce the pur...
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Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'guidelines'' or 'guideline's'?
Suggestion: guidelines'; guideline's
...specially protect the privacy and clear guidelines information with age limit.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1385.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4743083004 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8747761352 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628458498024 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.4010357759 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.888888889 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4444444444 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160530459988 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739730422685 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690140083218 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901403562734 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853266150215 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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