Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet, to communicate.
What are the advantages of international communication online?
Are there any disadvantages?
In today’s world, no one can argue that the technology has changed human lives significantly. Many technological communicating methods have been invented in the last decade. With the internet, it allows us to keep in touch with others who live in other cities effectively. Some people think that the online communication measure has many benefits to human beings while others think that it also has several drawbacks. Both advantages and disadvantages of the online communication will be discussed carefully.
On the one hand, there are many merits for the development of communication techn...
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Sentence: If a person try to express their ideas or try to use sarcasm, it may be hard for a recipient to understand clearly.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace try with verb, past tense
Sentence: Secondly, misinterpretation can easily happen during communicating online.
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