Some people think that the government should fund music, dance and arts lessons for children. Others think that they should be funded by private businesses or by children's families. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The industry of music, dance and arts have been making an ever increasing popularity since the previous decades. These also have served many benefits to people and even to the host country itself where the artists originated from - economic growth and successful tourisms to name a couple. However, the real issue here is, to whom should the funds come from, for the people to get trainings? Some people believe that it should get fundings from the government while the others think that it is the institutions' or families' responsibility to pay for lessons. In this essay, I will be discussing both...
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Sentence: There will always be a way on how this can be negotiated and it just needs proper analization of pros and cons.
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