It is better for the students to live away from their home during their university study rather than staying with their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In this day and age, some individuals assert that youngster will get multifarious benefits if they leave far from their guardians while there higher studies ,whereas other people neglect this statement. I partially concur with this assertion ,as if youngsters live with their family they have not need to leave there comfort zone, however they can become aware and self dependent by leave their families.
To comments with, one of the major advantage of staying away from family, rather than live with them. First and formost, student will get more opportunities to meet with people who belong to different states and cultures. It not only provide knowledge about different culture ,but also help to boost of their confidence ,Another reason is that ,if they live away from there parents, they become independent apparently they learn how to deal with obstacles of life. For example, if learners reside in accommodation, they have to learn different skills like cooking, cleaning and washing which make them mature .So that's why leave away from home can become a better choice for students.
However ,on the other hand, undoutedly home provide a comfort zone to children .Since they do not need to make any extra efforts to manage things ,as well as they acquire extra care and healthy food at home .Due to which they can eat healthy food ,instead of eating and hygienic food of restaurants. Besides this students can share things with their family members if they face any travel who help them to tackle with the problems.
To conclude although there are several benefits to stay with family during study at the universities ,but it is better for students who live away from their home ,because it provide and opportunity to communicate with others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, besides, but, first, however, if, so, well, whereas, while, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1459.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99657534247 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42054009581 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.7762421297 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 182.375 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.5 20.7667163134 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316596641884 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.158168205894 0.084324248473 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100621975752 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226061896335 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110844491238 0.056905535591 195% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.4 13.0946893788 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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